Hey everyone,
I'm writing on a conflict scene here but I'm not sure if this one line makes sense, a little help here please?
*When Augi screamed May lost it. She kicked off from the wall, fell, landed on the back on the recliner with one foot and put all her weight into stomping the other into the face of the thing that her brother.
"LET HIM GO!!" she snarled as she quickly kicked him in the side of the head with her other foot.
Caught off guard and abruptly blinded by the sole of the teenagers worn shoe he released the youngster he had grabbed and was thrown backward not completely by the kick but more by the fact that all of the teenage